Tuesday, January 23, 2007

Well I know this is a bit different than my normal writing, but I just thought I would switch some things up. So here it goes. Tell me what you think.

Affliction

A pause of mind
Moments, images, they infect our clarity
Their deepest regrets ignite a sickness
Stomach churns over what was lost and destroyed
Its acid burning at the heart which is most afflicted
Deforming manipulating tooling the heart to turn
Its serrate edge hacking the thoughts of you and me
Severed into memories of me without you
The body responds
Sinews repair, cells reform, order restored
Infection turned recession
Harmless out of the moment Crippling over the ages

1 Comments:

At 1:57 PM, Blogger Kevin said...

Not bad. Not bad at all. Keep it up.

 

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